Monday, April 28, 2014

Blog reflection Tri 2

The blog I chose was my first blog about Collapse http://tylercreadingblog.blogspot.com/2014/03/collapse-pt-1.html

I chose this blog I use words like,"dire situation" that are very descriptive or generally uncommon. In this blog and my others this Tri I have introduced a new chracter and then given some backround then shown how the act or change in what I have read so far and I think this shows that I can be very informative in my posts but I also like to comment on what i think of the character.


 In this post and many others I tend to use elevated diction such as,"massive huricane" or ,"very passionate" Using words like the previous examples, I think, help people to understand what I am describing or talking about. I also tend to use longer sentences that are seperated by commas because people tend to not stop reading something in the middle of a sentence so if I have longer sentences they will hopefully read more of the most and be more entertianed.

3 comments:

  1. Love how you discuss a book differently by talking about it using unique diction and syntax. Nice post!

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  2. I like how you reflected upon your reading habits and blogged just the way you talk. Keep up the good work!

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  3. You did a good job of expalinign how you thoguht you did. I like how you discuss your book in different ways, I think thats cool.

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