Blog Reflection

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This trimester most of my blog posts have been 2 paragraphs with a few exceptions. Of those posts I think this one is one of my best blogs because it is a pretty good length and shows some of the development of the book and the story. This post also shows how Tris has started to get over her fears with guns that started in the first book, so it kind of shows character development as well.

My goals for improvment on reading next Tri are I want to try to readmore often because this Tri i really didnt read as much as i had last Trimester. I also want to try to understand the characters in the books more. My goals for writing next Tri are to actually write and if/when i do write i want what i write to be longer and more detailed. I also want to work on making my writing more interesting instead of just writing boring stuff that nobody wants to read.

Alliegant pt 6

the book is getting towards the end and like most books do, its getting pretty intense. During tris's viewpoint her and tobias make up and get back together because she makes a few realizations that i want say because they might give stuff away but it definantly shows that she is maturing.

In the last part of the book we found out that David wanted Tris to be one of his advisors so during their fisrt meeting they learn that the alliegant, a resistance group in the city, is attacking different parts of the city so they make a decision the reset the memories of everyonr in the city, this motivates Tris Tobias and everyone in the resistance at the bureau to act soon and Tris creates a plan to steal the memory serum then reset the memories of the bureau so she talks to some scientists that are prt of the resistance and she talks to some other people and finalizes the plan.

aliegant pt 5

this section is of the book is quite depressing because after joining the plot the overthrow the bureau he badly hurt his friend and Tris cant even look at him because of it so he pretty much just mopes around feeling nothing but regret and this is pretty much the most emotion I've seen of him in the entire series its kind of weird  but interesting. His bad mood ended though when someone tells him about a secret meeting led by Tris that they needed him at. when Tobias gets to the meeting he thinks about how Tris didn't trust the plotters that get him in trouble and begins to think of the many other times he thought he should do something but Tris thought differently and ended up being right and he finally after hurting some of his only remaining friends that he should listen and I think its about time because the whole time he's either been making the wrong decisions or being skeptical of Tris's thoughts which are usually right. I guess he still hasn't changed much though because when he confronted Tris and tried to talk to her he ended up getting angry at her and storming away again after his outburst the viewpoint switches to Tris

alliegant pt 4

in this section of the book Tris had just agreed to become one of Davids advisors because even though she didnt join the uprising that she stopped she still didnt like the way the bureau ran so the best way to take over is to get high in there little gov. and then take over when they trust her. In order to become an advisor David tells tris she must go see some of the rest of the world because he requires his advisors to see it to better make decisions.

The next day Tris goes to the gaurds in charge of going out into the world and they give her a vest and because she is from an experiment and is dauntless they gave her a gun as well. On the expedition that tris joined they were going out to put up new equipment to monitor the people that lived outside the compound. When they arrive the first thing tris notices is that most of the people are children but before she can see anything else guns fire and she ducks into a lean-to when she peeks out she sees one of the outsiders pointing a gun at one of the people from the compound then to save him she points her gun at the outsider and notice that because it is lighter and feels different from the guns in the city she doesnt freeze up when she holds it like she used to. After the outsiders run everybody goes back and the viewpoint switches to Tobias.